Mike, you've got to elaborate. What things were in the book that weren't in the movie. Crucial details man. Really like the setting response but it was still a bit short. 111 words. You need at least 175.
Brian - 3/5 Responses.
Glad we finally have you on board. Your responses are pretty decent. I like both actually, but try to proofread and stick to one point. Your 2nd response rambles after your discussion of setting.
Larry - 4/5 Responses
Larry, regarding the conflict response, what do you think? You've brought up a point, provided examples, but never quite comment. In the setting response you start to comment then abandon ship. Expand on your thoughts. The character response is probably your strongest.
Leugim - 2/5 Responses
I like that response. It's personal, it's developed, and you raise good points. Make more. You're now on my suspicious persons list. 2/5 reponses. C'mon.
Lorenzo - 2/5 Responses
Renzo, you finished this book in the first week. You proceeded to write two responses. That is definitely not a recipe for success, lol. The one response you did write was way too much plot. You're overworking yourself. Stick to the question. How does the character change? I don't think you ever got around to that point. (BTW, you're sitting next to Leugim on the suspicious list.)
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